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npalermo

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« on: November 17, 2016, 07:14:54 AM »
Final Render! :) I look forward to learning more how to code organic shaders, and how to render more realistic using RenderMan 8)

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Re: P3_npalermo_v10
« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2016, 09:41:59 AM »
I really like your composition. Your fruit seem a little too saturated for apples.  Apples tend to be a little darker. The wood on the foregroud is also very bright and almost clipping, maybe adjusting your intensity could sell the piece more. Overall good work though.

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Re: P3_npalermo_v10
« Reply #2 on: November 18, 2016, 02:48:11 PM »
 8)Thank for you the critique, I agree the apples are way too saturated, but I am not familiar with the RenderMan lights yet, so I will be re-working this so to make it closer to realism.  :o